Reader’s Response Draft 2

Levi (2012) categorises various areas whereby social media is not widely used in his article, “Where ISN’T social media ubiquitous?”. He categorises these locations into a few main areas: areas where their “native language” is not supported by the more developed social media (such as Facebook and Twitter) and areas where internet is not widely made available. However, he asserts that the problem with “native language” is aided by the presence of second languages that are spoken in some areas, additionally, “native languages” are omitted at times due to political complications they bring.

The political complications here refers to recognition of language in contested regions. A “native language” that is recognised by an organisation might be interpreted as a form of political support. In contested regions, this might raise a few questions on whether the stand of a big international firm is appropriate in a regional conflict or if it is appropriate for large corporations to identify themselves politically. I personally feel that these corporations should not and instead, maintain a secular and neutral approach when faced with political issues.

Big corporations that identify politically has had their fair share of protests. One of such instance is companies that recognises Israel as a state. The conflict between Israel and Palestine has been ongoing for decades. When Amazon.com was revealed to have been involved in funding the Israeli military, it caused an uproar and mass boycott of the online store for its involvement int the conflict (Armbrsuter 2002). Although Amazon.com denied and claimed that it was due to false advertising, it has caused them to suffer losses and damaged reputation. People generally identify themselves with their political stand and opposing views are often rejected by individual groups. This would lead to an unhealthy bank balance for the corporations and would not be justified for such a corporation to be doing so, having built their reputation and size of the company. By denying, Amazon.com clearly feels that it was unhealthy to be associated to the political stand. Therefore, economically, it is not appropriate for big corporations to have such political association.

Although taking a stand might raise strong protests, there are times when it proves to be profitable. In the United States of America, private companies are allowed to fund a candidate’s election campaign. This is a form of political stand whereby the funding represents their alignment in thinking. This form of political stand allows the companies to invest in the candidates that would have jurisdiction or voting rights in matters that might benefit the company (Welsh & Young, 2010). Though it might be bold, I personally feel that it is manipulative on the companies’ part as future policies might favour their businesses at the expense of other companies in the market.

Corporations make decisions based on their profitability albeit political or not. Although making a political stand could be a double-edged sword, ethically, I personally feel that secularity is best in political issues as it shows neutrality and prevents any form of opposition against the companies while promoting a level playing field in the market.

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References:

Armbruster, S. (2002, November 15). Amazon denies backing Israel. Retrieved February 9, 2015, from http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/2473005.stm

Levi, D. (2012, July 24). Where ISN’T social media ubiquitous? [Web log post].Retrieved from http://www.etondigital.com/where-isnt-social-media-ubiquitous/

Welsh, H., & Young, R. (2010). How Companies Influence Elections-Political Campaign Spending Patterns and Oversight at America’s Largest Companies. Available at SSRN 1692739.

Reader’s Response Draft 2

2 thoughts on “Reader’s Response Draft 2

  1. Chuye says:

    Feedback:

    Content:
    1) People generally identify themselves with their political stand and opposing views are often rejected by individual groups -> We are unable to understand this sentence. Are you trying to say that people will associate themselves with companies that assumes a similar political stand and reject/boycott companies that do not?

    2)This would lead to an unhealthy bank balance for the corporations and would not be justified for such a corporation to be doing so, having built their reputation and size of the company. -> We cannot figure out what you are trying to say because we cannot understand with the former.

    3) By denying, Amazon.com clearly feels that it was unhealthy to be associated to the political stand.
    -> Might be better for you to mention what Amazon.com is denying.

    Food for thought. Is there really a neutral ground in all situations?

    Language:

    1) Verb tense is not consistent. e.g: People generally identify themselves with their political stand and opposing views are often rejected by individual groups. This would lead to an unhealthy bank balance for the corporations and would not be justified for such a corporation to be doing so, having built their reputation and size of the company -> We think it should be in the present tense (Check with Brad)

    2) Although **making a political stand could be a double-edged sword**, ethically, I personally feel that secularity is best in political issues as it shows neutrality and prevents any form of opposition against the companies while promoting a level playing field in the market
    -> Who is making a political stand? (should be the same issue that Brad mentioned : Despite being XXXX, state the subject)

    Citations:

    1) This will do, do not have to mention the retrieved date.
    Armbruster, S. (2002, November 15). Amazon denies backing Israel. Retrieved from http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/2473005.stm

    3) Welsh, H., & Young, R. (2010). How Companies Influence Elections-Political Campaign Spending Patterns and Oversight at America’s Largest Companies. Retrieved from Social Science Research Network website: http://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=1692739

    From Chuye and Sue Anne.

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  2. Brad says:

    This is, potentially, an interesting response, Asyraf. I like the focus, though it is not so clear to me how tying corporations and their alleged support an online vendor connects to the ubiquity of social media. You need to strengthen that connection. You might be able to do so by clarifying what the allegations were about Amazon (which is not clear in your response).

    There are also numerous language problems in this response, though I can get a sense of your stand.

    Language issues include:

    — areas whereby > why ‘whereby’?

    — where their “native language” > What word does “their” refer to?

    — However, he asserts that the problem with “native language” is aided by the presence of second languages that are spoken in some areas, additionally, “native languages” are omitted at times due to political complications they bring. > run on sentence

    — I personally feel that these corporations should not and instead, maintain a secular and neutral approach when faced with political issues. >>> break into two sentence:
    I personally feel that these corporations should not DO X. Instead, THEY SHOULD maintain a secular and neutral approach when faced with political issues.

    — Big corporations that identify politically has had…. > verb/agreement?

    — One of such instance > One such instance…

    — companies that recognises > ?

    — (Armbrsuter 2002) > ?

    — Although Amazon.com denied and claimed that it was due to false advertising, it has caused … > what does ‘it’ refer to? (explain/spell it out….)

    — By denying, > By denying WHAT? (explain in detail)

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